Jada

[Tirry]

Name: Jada
Age: 6
Birthplace: Redwall Abbey
Gender: Male
Species: Squirrel
Job/Position: Dibbun!
Physical Description:

Jada is tall for a dibbun. He has a light brown back fur and an off- white underbelly. He has dark brown eyes. He is confident about his life so he carries himself with a bold swagger. One of his legs did not develop as much as the other, so he walks with a limp.

Belongings:

a short walking stick

Personality:

Jada likes life and is confident in most of his decisions. He is ambitious, trying to take on situations that are a bit too mature. He is really good at writing, but not so good at athletics. He enjoys food too, and tries to help out in the kitchen as much as possible.

History:

Jada was born in Redwall Abbey. He did not know the last war that plagued the abbey. He always tried to run with the other dibbuns, but was always slower than the others because of his bum leg. He never let that stop him. His parents itched for adventure and wandering, but did not want Jada to leave the safety of the abbey. They left and come back once or twice a year to check on him. That made him feel abandoned and so seeks affection from others.

Code Words: Tears; Trifle

[Treble Tiderunner]

Hello Tirry! You've got a great start here, lets see if we can expand on it.

The war was two years ago, so unless he was born to slaves, it would be hard for him to be born in the abbey. I'd love to see a little more expansion on his personality, as well. He likes to write and he likes to eat, he's rambunctious, what else?

"That made him feel abandoned and so seeks affection from others." Something to this effect would belong better in his personality.

I'll look it over again when you've edited. I can't wait to see a dibbun on the site!