Malum

[Malum]

Name: Non Malum (Goes by Malum)
Age: 20
Birthplace: Mossflower
Gender: Female
Species: Ferret
Job/Position: Wanderer
Physical Description:

Malum is a regular black footed ferret. She is small for her age and is very skinny, causing her to be fast. She wears a long, green cloak with ivu marking up the side. When walking along, she usually wears the hood up, so not to be spotted as a vermin by woodlanders. She has striking ivy colored eyes. She has a vintage necklace that is black (Will show a picture)

Belongings:

Malum owns her cloak, (described above). She also has a haversack hidden underneath her cloak, filled with food, water, and various other items including medicine. She has a green tinted sword with an emerald in it's hilt.

Personality:

Malum is a good vermin, and she is very sweet. She carries a weapon, because sge needs protection and can't afford to get hurt. Malum is very honorable, and will almost never attack from behind unless they harmed one of her friends, or a dibbun. She thinks very smartly, but will usually not act snobby, unless someone, harms a friend or dibbun. Very friendly, she will help almost anyone.

Strengths:
-Swimming
-Weaponry
-Speed
-Stealth

Weaknesses:
-Spiders
-Heights
-Dibbuns (can't say no)

History:

Malum was born into a horde. Her parents were the horde leaders, and she hated her life from the start. She had to live with her parents, who were known for their violence, and slave-keeping. Her parents agve Malum her necklace, a symbol of her family name. Even though she ran away at the age of 13, she still kept the necklace to show that she had not forgotten her roots, and that she was still part of the family. After she ran away, for the logest time, she only had a few rusty daggers. When, one day she was off exploring deep into the heart of Mossflower, when she came upon a small cave. When she walked inside, she spotted the most intruiging gemstones and ores. She grabbed her daggers and went to work. She grabbed some of the beutiful black stone, and trhis eventually upgraded her necklace. She saw the green tinted ores over in the corner, and she ran over there, cutting off many chunks, hoping someone would be able to weld them for her. She also grabbed some small diamonds, and left. She traveled for weeks with those stones weighing her down. She eventually came upon an old badger, who worked on a welder. She came into his workshop and looked around. She called out, and suddenly, the badger had his paws around her, squeezing.

"What do you want here, vermin?" The badger asked, still squeezing Malum.

"I just wanted to see if anyone...lived here..." Malum said, gasping.

"Well, now that you know that someone does live here, what are you going to do?" Thor, the badger asked, releasing Malum, who collapsed, gasping on the floor.

"I'll leave..." Malum said, crawling out of the door.

Yet, the badger picked Malum up and carried her inside. He layed her on the bed, and he picked up her satchel, he rifled through it and picked up the green ore.

"What you got here?" Thor asked.

"Ore, in case someone can weld a sword for me..." Malum said.

Thor smiled.

"I can do that for you..." He said. "What do you want on your sword?"

Malum blinked in shock and then spoke.

"I want ot to be a regular sword, yet with a comfortable leather grip. Also, the blade should be tinted green, and with little ivy markings up the side... If that's okay."

Thor walked out.

"Sure thing."

In a few days time, Thor returned into the room with something covered in cloth.

"Here is your sword, and I made you a sheath. I figured out your name, by looking at your stuff, so I enscripted your name on it."

Malum got up slowly, her ribs still bruised. She took the sword carefully aand took it out of it's sheath.

"It's perfect...." She said.

Attachments:

[Malum]

Hello?

-looks around-

[Silas]

Hello, I've no idea what happened to all the folks on here. They seem to have vanished, at least temporarily. I'll make sure your character gets a look from the site leadership when they come back from wherever.

[Malum]

Thanks!

[Treble Tiderunner]

Hello, nice to see you again!

I really like Malum. She looks nice. But I want to see her personality filled out more, and you didn't include weaknesses and strengths. Her history should be extended and expanded, and how old was she when she ran away, anyway?

The necklace. Who gave it to her, where'd she get it, why? The sword. If she's so peaceful, what's with the sword? Why is it green? Where'd she get it, why, etc.

Thanks!

[Malum]

There, if you need me to change anything else, just ask.

Also, I hope it's okay that the part of the histroy os kinda rpish. I just didn't want to have to spell it all out.

[Malum]

Hello? -echo-

[Treble Tiderunner]

Ok, aside from the fact that all sorts of different gems and ores don't just show up in the same cave, what about this green ore? I can't think of any metal strong enough to be a sword that would be green. Why do you want a green sword? There doesn't seem to be any solid reason behind it, other than perhaps it would be cool to have a green blade.

And actually, I would rather you not roleplay anything out in your character's bio. This is supposed to be a factual telling. What about this badger? He suddenly wants to make her a blade after trying to kill her? Why would she care about a sword anyway, as I've said. Carrying a sword is like advertising "I like to fight." Some daggers or a staff would be better suited for getting by peacefully without having to fight, which she doesn't like.

Thanks! And sorry about the wait.