Kiara

[kiara]

Your character's full name:

Kiara Nytar

Age: Early 20's
Species: Mouse
Gender: Female
Appearance:

Kiara has light brown fur with white paws, making it look like she wears gloves. She has bright baby-blue eyes.
Being a female, she's not as strong as a male would be, but she is pretty strong for her petit size. She has a defined feminine figure, which she would use in certain situations to get her out of trouble, but has yet to have to use her body, relying more on her techniques in bow-and-arrows.
Kiara wears loose blue-ish clothing, complementing her eyes.

Belongings:

Kiara carries with her a bow and a quiver of arrows. The arrows she hads made herself, with a 'K' engraved into each one.
She is always wearing a blue star shaped necklace around her neck, as if someone found a starfish and dipped it in blue crystal.
She also carries with her a nap-sack. for which she carries her clothes, food, and other such items.

Job or Position:

Traveler

Personality:

Kiara is a young field mouse full of energy and enthusiasm in what ever she does. She has a happy-go-lucky attitude and can sometimes be too trusting, but if you cross her, you best beware.
She is happy to stop where ever she is to make a friend or two, before continunig on her travels.

History and Background Information:

Being the eldest of three, Kiara spend much of her time helping her parents out with her two younger siblings, spening her free time practicing her arrow shot.
In her mid teens, She had gotten restless and wanted to see what else was out there instead of doing the same old thing, so when she had excelled in the art of bow-and-arrows, it was time for her to leave home and explore the ever changing world.

Now in her early twenty's she still travels around to see what else is out there.

Any other details:

Parents - John and Mary
Sliblings - Taylor and Marisa

Code Words: -Correct-

[Treble Tiderunner]

She is pretty strong for her size.

What is her size? What is her shape? is she chubby, slim, rail-thin, a voluptuous beauty? This necklace, is it star-shaped, or does it have a pendant that is star-shaped?

Overall this bio could use some smoothing and better flow to the sentences. The history is bare-bones, I'd love to see more about her family, where she lived, etc. Also, you state she is in her early twenties in the history but above you state she is 18. Which is true?

I'd love to see those changes, but technically it fits the requirements. The codewords are in the rules and main plot. You will notice they don't seem to fit in with the surrounding sentences. ^^

Thank you,

Skipp

[kiara]

Will work on these changes

thanks

[Treble Tiderunner]

Accepted, you may now RP. ^^