Brinkenya Serai

[Rakko]

Your character's full name: Brinkenya *Brink* Serai
Age: 16 Years
Species: Mole
Gender: Female

Appearance: She is your average mole. She is black with a medium sized black tail. She has a lighter black stomach which is barely noticeable. One eye, however, is the normal dark brown while the other is a dull yellow. Some say she is blind in the yellow eye, but only she know's for sure. Along with the blind rumour, it has also been said that the eye has simply ded and the colour faded (when others beleive she was born that way).

Belongings: A book of Redwall Legends that her father used to read to her.

Job or Position: Orchard Attendant and Gardener of Redwall Abbey

Personality: She is, like most moles, a little shy. She loves hotroot soup and will eat it by the bowlfuls. When it comes to soup, she can out eat a hare, however unlike a hare she will not sneak or eat somebeast's just to get it. She is kind and honest and would prefer to wait patiently and eat the leftovers. She loves fun and friends, and dispite her shyness, can, on occasion, 'party with the best of them'.

Strengths: She is a very skilled digger. She is also very good at cooking, especially soup brewing and pastry making but they are only hobbies.

Weaknesses: She is not the brightest beast when it comes to fighting and she can be swayed very easily to do nearly anything when soup is involved. She dislikes when people talk ill of her family liniage or claim she is not good enough for something because of her gender.

History and Background Information: Brink was born outside of the Abbey to two moles who had formally lived there. They had fled quickly durring the attack; as gentlebeast, the where not ones to stand and fight. They where an older couple by the time they had Brink (their only child) and they loved her well. They would spend hours talking of the great red fortraiss. Brink enjoyed her fathers tales so much that when he died(of natural causes), she vowed she would seek Redwall so she may live the stories she had heard. After her mother died a few seasons later, Brink set out on her journey. After arriving in Mossflower, she did her best to find Redwall quickly, with the help of some forest voles. When she arrived, she fell She was quickly accepted into the Abbey and given the joabsolutely in love witht he orchards and vowed to do everything in her power to keep them healthy and producing. She is eager to help rebuild the Abbey after the war.

Any other details:
Likes/Favorite activities: digging. Playing with dibbuns
Dislikes/Least favorite activities: none
Gourmet of choice: soup
Beverages of choice: any
Favorite color(s): grayish brown
Nicknames: Brink
Birth Place: The Sternian Forest
Residence: Redwall
Social Class: High
Alignment: good

[Treble Tiderunner]

1. Foremole is either a hereditary (in some books) or a elected position(in others), I don't think simply applying and being a good tunneler is good enough. And frankly at sixteen, she may be good but there will always be those who know much more than she, are more experienced, and reliable. Not to say she's not but still.

2. That bit about talking ill of her parents come from the wide blue sky in left field, there's no basis for anything like that anywhere else in the bio, plus, who'd talk ill of them, she's from so far away, they wouldn't know them!

3. The 'Mossflower Continent' (as I like to call it) is pretty large, but so are the oceans. Did she come from an island? I doubt moles would travel completely across either ocean just because they feel like it, especially as the Abbey was a) so dear to them, and b) quite possibly still intact and happy when the grandpappies 'n'grandmammies left, and c) moles are notorious for hating water, but this is not true for all moles, naturally.

4. You state her only weakness is about her parents, then go on to describe more. You can't have it both ways. Also, I'd really like to see a more in depth personality here. It looks like you just wanted to play a mole and so threw some generalities together. Uniqueness makes characters more fun. ^^

5. Why are her eyes so off the normal mole-eye-color? (Brown, black) Is this a family trait? What new tunnel system? The appearance could use some filling out as well.

6. One position or the other; Foremole or badger father? Also we go by years here, not seasons.

[Rakko]

Ok I think I took care of all of those for you

[Treble Tiderunner]

You still have foremole in the title and her history.

[Rakko]

Wow I'm retarted... I changed those

[Treble Tiderunner]

no you're not.

Accepted.